Narrative writing

                            John got bullied

There was once a boy called John. John was a little boy, he was about 9 yrs old. John always got bullied from an 11 yr old boy.

The bullies name was Andre. Andre bullied everyone in his school.

After 2 weeks at school he got suspended for 7 weeks for hurting someone. He had been bullying others for 3 yrs.

After Andre came back from being suspended he said sorry to John and then John said, “ I accept your apology”.

1 week went by and John asked him if he wanted to play and Andre said, “Yes”. That’s how Andre and John became friends forever.

When Andre left primary school John kept on crying and crying until the next year.

Andre came and visited his old primary and John came straight up to him and said,  “Long time no see. I’ve been wanting for you to visit. John had no friend for one year. John said I’ve already have a friend his name was James and when John saw James, John started punching James and then Andre said our friendship is over. After 5 yrs John was grown up and he had he had 7 friends. There name are Jake, Xavier, Lui, Sam, Cactus, Shaun and Wayne. John and his friends went prison because they robbed the liquor store and they were only 16 yrs old and then John saw his old friend andre. Andre was swearing at John and the after 4 yrs they came out of prison and then andre and John were fighting then John and Andre were back to prison for another 4yrs.                 THE END.

John

AFL

                               

                                                      AFL

we played and Joshua and meliana haded to rock paper sises so which team can wear the pip and  copeland was the goal keeper for team hawks and olo for team Sydney swans.

And team Sydney swans won but it was a really good game i enjoy playing but the points was Sydney swans had 4 and 

 hawks.

AFl

                                  AFL

                                                               The ruck

The first thing was the umpire has to throw the ball up and say 12 0'clock 3 0'clock 6 0'cloak and 90'clock and then when they say it the two other people have to jump and high-five the ball. Who ever hits the ball in the right direction gets a point.

What,The ball is thrown up & you have to jump up & high-five.
when,At the start of the each quarter, after a goal & throw in.
why,To decide who gets the ball.
why,The ruck-man & umpire



Ruck'o clock

Umpire calls out a o'clock & throws the ball then you hit the ball that direction.
e.g. 12 0'clock is forward
3 0'clock is right
6 0'clock is behind
9 0'clock is left.

Nana And The Flower Arranger

Nana and the flower arranger.

There was  a funeral happening, Luke was standing and looking at people coming into the service.   They put some of Nana’s  garden flowers on top of the coffin. Luke didn’t feel well.

Luke he felt sad, and unhappy because his Nana died.  There were lots of people eating and drinking.

Luke was staying outside for long his mum and dad asked to Luke come inside to eat but he said no. Luke said can you tell me a story about Nana. But dad said, "I have no story to

talk about Nana."

Luke wanted to go back to the cemetery and  put some flowers to the grave. But it was all messy and he heard a noise coming from the ground and it was the weka.

They were all proud of luke because luke told the story about Nana they clapped and was happy.

The all laughed and they said, Nana would laugh about the weka. They all laughed for many weeks.

The part I like about the story is when luke told the story about Nana and they were proud.

The End

By: Keean

Book review 5

Rugby

By tony williams and

Gordon hunter.

Rugby is my favourite sport. I like this book because it tells me how to play and learn how to tackle and learn  how to step other people.

I play for a club called marist my team lost to te atatu roosters we were undefeated  but when we saw a team we saw te atatu roosters the looked strong and big. We had 16 tries and they had 22 tries so our first time losing i can't believe that so then i got the the player of the game.

Our team will have to be more focused game and get ready and tackle them hard as we can.

By:keean

Daffodils

     Daffodils

People arrive in Middle run farm 12.00 on a sunday. Some people comes in a car or a bus or a train. It is called daffodil express. It finishes at 4 pm. They all wanted to come and pick some daffodils.

A lot of people went home with an armful daffodils while other people putting the daffodils on their shoulders as the walk away when they went to the hill.

Sadako sasaki

Sadako Sasaki

Sadako Sasaki was a little Japanese girl who lived during the Hiroshima bomb in 1945. Sadako was killed by the bomb. The people of Hiroshima made a statue of Sadako with a crane on top. In the story she turned into a spirit. She died because the bomb fell down near her house. Sakao made 1000 crane before she died. Poor sadako.